Query, Synopsis & Blurb Critiques

Queries, synopses and blurbs are some of the hardest things writers have to cope with. And if you’re considering self-publishing, it’s all up to you! But don’t worry, I can help you scrub these up until they sparkle with hooks and excitement!

The Query Critique:

For only $15 I can review your query letter. This price includes one revision. All subsequent revisions are $5 each.

The Synopsis Critique:

For only $15 I can review your synopsis. This price includes one revision. All subsequent revisions are $5 each.

The Blurb Critique:

For only $15 I can review your blurb. This price includes one revision. All subsequent revisions are $5 each.

Package Deal:

Choose 2 of these options for only £25.

​Or see the submission package deal here:


Marisa is lovely to work with. And she is very wise. Her feedback is balanced – highlighting strengths as well as areas for improvement which I found both valuable and supportive. She gives fantastic and actionable advice from voice to plot logic to grammatical quirks. I would work with Marisa again.”

Nicola Dahlin – mentoring client.

If you would like to work with me, please email marisanoelle77@gmail.com for enquiries.